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Sarah. Just Add Hyperfocus's avatar

Limbo. “The Waiting Place” (Dr Seuss). I love the three parts here, as always - brilliantly written.

My Mum lost the capacity for meaningful communication, which was SO SO hard.

I don’t do religion but I was effectively praying for her parents (long gone) to come and get her. It was torture.

I think she waited until my cousin came over from England and I had someone with me. On the second visit with my cousin, I felt my Mum skip out the door as we walked in to her room. My cousin is a nurse and we looked at Mum and decided between us that she had gone. I had to go tell the nurse in charge that my Mum wasn’t alive any more. You should have seen that nurse jump off her chair!

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Wow. Amazing to see when someone’s not in their body anymore.

Irene Bedard's avatar

Dierdre, I just love your writing. I would love to see you!

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Yes me too! Check your inbox I just sent a note. 💕

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

Beautiful, Deirdre. I love how you set up life and death through humor, then wrote a scene with your mother evoking exactly that. I remember that time with my own mom, the not-knowing and the particular quality of presence. 💙

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thanks Julie. It’s true. I’m so curious about these similarities we share in these experiences.

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

When fear is willing to sit down for a bit, wonder arrives. And beauty.

tamara pullman's avatar

the waiting. nothing prepares us for this moment. why not? the strangeness of it all, seeing your mother as helpless as a baby~not knowing what to say~ your writing captures all of that bewilderment. your place in relation to her....who knew that leaving this world was as difficult as entering..? painful and beautiful time. the writing feels like an urgent part of the experience~

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

It’s such a strange place to be in, kind of waiting and trying to be present and knowing/ not knowing how it will end.

Noha Beshir's avatar

My God, Deirdre. At the risk of repeating myself AGAIN, everything you write is exquisite and profound and devastating and hilarious. I just... I don't know how you do it but I am so glad to get to read your words.

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Noha! You made my day! Thank you.

Noha Beshir's avatar

I meant every word and I mean it every time.

Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I spoke to my dad the day before he left us, he said, "my numbers up darling, there's no changing the ticket now" it broke my freaking heart but he was right.

Gorgeous, deeply moving writing Deirdre...

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thanks Susie, and I love what your Dad said! He has some dramatic flair as well! :)

Lynn J. Broderick's avatar

Love your writing, Deirdre. I’m in the same waiting game with my mom. Just a matter of time now…. Look forward to reading more.

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thank you. I have heard from at least 5 different people who are going through this. I’m glad we all found each other.

Lynn J. Broderick's avatar

Just wrote a note about not planning to be a Death and Grief Writer, but…. 🫶🫶🫶

Woman Who Wept Fire's avatar

Beautiful

Allison Deraney's avatar

Gosh, you weave humor and humanity and heart together so seamlessly every time you write.

The waiting and wondering when is so hard. On everyone {*hugs*}

“To be seen! What a relief.” Yes , thank the good lord for our kids who hold us up to ourselves, right?

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thanks Allison and yes to everything you said! :)

Amy Brown's avatar

I love your way of seeing the world, Deidre, and big hug to you and your sweet mom. You made me smile with your hospice vignette and that’s not an easy thing to do with that situation. We laugh, we cry, how close those two emotions really are. 💗

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thanks Amy and yes it's true they really are close!

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

❤️

Sharon McGauley's avatar

This is wonderful. 🩷

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thanks Sharon!

Jean G's avatar

Peace to you in the waiting, and thanks for sharing your beautiful writing.

Richbee's avatar

Becket: Wait for Godot. Day after day. Then, maybe go. Maybe not. Our choice. Let go. Like diving off a board or jumping out of a plane. Spread your wings. Sail.

Maureen's avatar

Love and comfort to you and yours during this time, Deirdre.❤️

Rob Tourtelot's avatar

This is so beautiful, Deirdre. Expansive, wise, funny, sad, and so full of love. It's such a surreal thing to see a parent through hospice (as I've done with both of my parents now). I'm always so happy to see a new piece from you. This one will stay with me, for sure. All the best to you and your family.

Deirdre Lewis's avatar

Thank you, Rob and yes, it really is surreal… it feels a little neither here nor there!